love my eyes
it made that call
love my hands
it made that call
love my heart
it made that call
love my mind
it made that call
love my guts
it made that call
love love me
I made that call
.
thats the verdict.
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.
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love my eyes
it made that call
love my hands
it made that call
love my heart
it made that call
love my mind
it made that call
love my guts
it made that call
love love me
I made that call
.
thats the verdict.
.
.
.
Whenever everything is working together it’s an easy call to make. Beautiful poem. I enjoyed the repetition.
thank you dan..
Kris,
A very positive and uplifting piece of writing.
Nicely done.
Hope you have a lovely weekend Kris,
Eileen
thank you eileen and same to you. hv a nice weekend!
How beautiful is that
thank you budhaaah..
I like this.
It has an air of uplifting about it
thanks bro and i really like yor videos.. they are so imaginative and funny!
mmmhhm, tres romantique
love the layout of the poem!! x
truly? thanks!
wonder what the call is tho.
keep wondering haha! good for the mind!
Very cool! as always.It is all about what we can’t control…and what we can. Very inspiring to me Fiveloaf.
thanks bro..
Sometimes things just come together. Dare I say it? “Good call, Friveloaf.” Poem on ….
thanks jamie..
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what i said in my posting ‘origami sakura’ regarding your accidental pingback applies to this poem as well. kindly arrest the problem soonest possible..
i love your poetry !!
tahnks ladynimue..