I looked at you
you looked at me
we looked at them
in disgust
.
their very own backyard
is overgrown with weeds
and yet
they are pointing fingers
at ours?
.
I looked at you
you looked at me
we shook our heads
we laughed..
.
.
.
I looked at you
you looked at me
we looked at them
in disgust
.
their very own backyard
is overgrown with weeds
and yet
they are pointing fingers
at ours?
.
I looked at you
you looked at me
we shook our heads
we laughed..
.
.
.
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funny poem,
people are picky on others, but they forget about their own problems,
you did it in a nice way!
what is worrying are the hypocrites who loves to bother other peoples affair rather than minding their own dirty garden.. thanks jingle!
nice one… before pointing others poeple should look at themselves first…
took the words out from my mouth destiny..
Wow is it Thursday there already? I forget sometimes that the world is on different times. I keep thinking we’re all under the same stars
yea- we’re all under the same stars! so why can’t we live as one… (psssst- scorpions)
This is SO GOOD. I love poems like yours.
Happy Wednesday and Thursday!
hugs
shakira
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drop by anytime shakira and thank you for your comment..
sometimes it is best just to laugh…nice verse…
tq brian- hv a gud day!
i’m so glad i dont have a backyard. lol
what? haha! you are the funniest..
I loved this. Simple, but with a point.
hey thanks buddy- love to hear more of you in time to come..
Most definitely. These poems are inspiring.
Can I add you on my blog, if you don’t mind?
sure slaveboi and i shall add you too!
a deep poem, i should say… there are so many proverbs about your poem.. but you wrote a poem that is easy to remember, yet points out a lot to the readers…
hey ishabelle- always my no. 1 supporter but more than that, you give wonderful comments. you might also be interested in my 20 selected works which i personally choose? bye!
This was a different poem and such a pleasure to read… I laughed with you at the end
hey souldose- thank you for dropping by- there are many so called pious people outside who are really big sinners yet, they go around picking on others..
We humans are so jugdgemental…thanks for the reminder we need to take it lighly and laugh. Enjoyed this play on it.
hey thanks suzicate- hv a nice day…
Happy Thursday!
same to you JI- ngle?
a complex truth revealed with simplicity. Thanks!
hey bfg, thank you for dropping by..
simple, but delighting ~
i enjoyed this immensely : )
thank you samantha yeh- shall be going to yours soon..
loved it. absolutely correct.
thank you- maybe you’d like “fragrance of the east” in my archive..
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wow shakira- isnt this a little bit jumping the gun? but thks anyway..